Question by bookbuyer: I'll give you a cookies if you look at this!!!?
This is the near last scene of my book and I would like opinions on how it is. It has not been edited. So I'm sorry for any errors.
As Derek walked toward Emma he very carefully kept his right hand in his pocket. His hand wrapped about a small plastic object, and his eyes keeping the guard in his peripheral vision. His footsteps sounded loudly in the space, as his thoughts whirled with thoughts. Was this really the proper
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